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From the original thread:

Howard Tayler:
Have you found a typo, a grammatical error, or some similar problem in the Schlock Mercenary archives?

This is the place to post your find.

It's not the place to DISCUSS your find. Just post it, post the reasons why you think that you've found a legitimate error, and let it go at that. I'll respond after researching the matter.

If you post other stuff in this forum, I will delete your post. This thread will stay on-track even if I have to lay that track through a mountain of corpses.

-Howard

I'll be more than happy to exercise the banhammer I've been given, so stay on topic, remain civil, and I won't have to wield it.

... because I only had one radiation suit.

freeflier New Member Posts: 15	Copy-Editing Only Aug 21, 2019 2:14:48 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by freeflier on Aug 21, 2019 2:14:48 GMT Wednesday 21 August 2019 Word order panel 2, Murtagh: "Doctor Bunnigus relieved of you duty when your son died." should be "Doctor Bunnigus relieved you of duty when your son died." --FreeFlier

grahamf New Member Posts: 45	Copy-Editing Only Sept 1, 2019 1:09:59 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by grahamf on Sept 1, 2019 1:09:59 GMT Sunday, September 1rst, 2019 Nintendo would sue, not Niantic. Nintendo is the main IP holder and is lawsuit happy.
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Post by evileeyore on Nov 17, 2019 2:41:41 GMT

2019-11-17

"Perhaps despite being in the accompanied by comrades-at-arms, what they'll for is not to feel so alone."

I think you had two sentences in mind? Either 'being in the company of' or 'being accompanied by' would suffice, both at once is ... muddled.

Last Edit: Oct 20, 2021 18:45:16 GMT by evileeyore: Had date wrong.

... because I only had one radiation suit.

evileeyore God Posts: 1,887	Copy-Editing Only Dec 21, 2019 3:22:00 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by evileeyore on Dec 21, 2019 3:22:00 GMT Friday December 20, 2019 "donning" Sir, the word you want is 'doffing'. Don is 'to put on', doff is 'to remove'. You can tell because the words 'on' and 'off' are right there in them.
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evileeyore God Posts: 1,887	Copy-Editing Only Feb 6, 2020 3:19:36 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by evileeyore on Feb 6, 2020 3:19:36 GMT Thursday February 6, 2020 "You were using to game-theory to divine Pa'anuri motivations." Bolded 'to' is one to too many.
	... because I only had one radiation suit.

evileeyore God Posts: 1,887	Copy-Editing Only Apr 12, 2020 1:47:54 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by evileeyore on Apr 12, 2020 1:47:54 GMT Sunday April 12, 2020 "And if is a negotiation," should be "And if it is a negotiation,"
	... because I only had one radiation suit.

Adam Guest	Copy-Editing Only Jul 11, 2020 13:47:54 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Adam on Jul 11, 2020 13:47:54 GMT 2020-03-01 "...continued breathing will that much sweeter" should be "...continued breathing will be that much sweeter."

Adam Guest	Copy-Editing Only Jul 16, 2020 0:39:23 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Adam on Jul 16, 2020 0:39:23 GMT In the print version of Book XI, Part II: Barsoom Circus Command, every instance of 'musth' has been autocorrected(?) to 'must.'

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Post by Monteith on Jul 16, 2020 19:33:06 GMT

On 2011-09-28, Legs says, "I cant' (instead of can't) wait to tell Tagon that since he wouldn't give us a gunship, we had to steal one."

The transcript has it right, but the inked version (at least online) is still wrong.

Hoping someone still checks this thread,

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Trying Guest	Copy-Editing Only Sept 25, 2020 11:19:39 GMT via mobile Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Trying on Sept 25, 2020 11:19:39 GMT On September 28, 2008. Second panel Massey says " there's not much he could have done beyond yelling at me. And that would have slowed down the counter suing more than a little" To me this should say either "wouldn't" or "would not"

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Post by evileeyore on Oct 20, 2021 18:11:13 GMT

From Steev Ramsdell on the Schlock Facebook group:

"Is there a way to update the transcripts on some strips? In particular, I've noticed that the "sign" transcript from www.schlockmercenary.com/2001-03-06 is incomplete, trailing off to "illegible" when it isn't (last line is AASIMOVHEINLEN)"

... because I only had one radiation suit.

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